I highlighted the negatives and positives throughout the response however overall i gave it a level 3 because the terminology was mostly accurate and although it diverts from the questions a lot it tries to stay focused. The argument isn't made clear and doesn't reach a final conclusion.
in my exam I will improve this response by ensuring i stay focused on the question and making sure all my terminology is accurate throughout. When i have finished i will reach a conclusion making sure I answer the question it is asking.
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